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Cloudy: Make It Rain

7 years ago by ahmadmanga

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NOTE: This game is Discontinued. I'm not sure I still have the source files. For my recent projects, check my profile.

A Simple Cute Game where youcontrol a cloud and rain on trees, while avoiding the wind and collecting clouds to grow.

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electrithm 7 years ago

Game Graphics Animation Reply

NAITIK-singh-coder-944 2 years ago

Yes yar game is bad
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NAITIK-singh-coder-944 2 years ago

ahmadmanga 1 year ago

Thanks, while I won't work on this game again. Can you tell me why the animation is bad? Some people praised it below.
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MrDave 7 years ago

UI Graphics Level Design

I know tutorial levels should be easy but I still found the tutorial level too slow. Fun when you get into the main game though.

ahmadmanga 1 year ago

Thanks for your opinion. I haven't finished this project but I learned a lot from it. I can't believe 6 years have already gone by. I'm not sure if I have the source codes for CLOUDY anymore, but if you'd like you might want to check my other project(s) here.
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Vegeta 6 years ago

Game Graphics Controls

I tried to test it out but the page wouldn't load.

SilentKiller 5 years ago

It seems pretty fun but put rain clouds more often

ahmadmanga 1 year ago

Thanks for the feedback. I agree that the cloud didn't feel fun to control, I wish I tweaked it a bit, but it's been a few years since I last touched this project. I'm not sure if I have the sources for CLOUDY anymore. If you'd like you might want to check my other project(s) here.

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SilentKiller 5 years ago

or have them expand your cloud more otherwise great

MrPeace 4 years ago

Story/Writing/Dialogue Tutorial/Learning Curve

your game is pretty cool. I like it

ahmadmanga 1 year ago

Thanks for the reply. I discontinued this project, but you might want to check the Visual Novel I made after that. See it in my profile.~
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FluffyPawsGames 4 years ago

Controls Tutorial/Learning Curve

The tutorial was a bit slow and it seemed it's not gonna end. The game itself was better but maybe too fast in a later phase. What I missed the most were sounds. The game was kinda dull without any sound or music.

ahmadmanga 1 year ago

Thanks for the feedback. I always add the sound effects as the last thing in my projects because I'm not into sound design, and when I posted CLOUDY here, it was in early stages compared to what was planned.

Even I, playing it now, I feel that it was too slow in the beginning. I'll take that in mind when I make a new game.

I discontinued this project a few years ago. I most likely have lost the source codes for this game, but if you'd like you might want to check my other project here. (Check my profile.)
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SHAYMEX 4 years ago

Game Graphics Tutorial/Learning Curve

Hm. Some sound effects should be added to make more of a realistic experience along with parallax scrolling with more depth. Little things like these could actually make a difference as it will hype the player. If you continued going more depth I think the game would be pretty fun. Tutorial need work too.

NAITIK-singh-coder-944 2 years ago

Yes you are right
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ahmadmanga 1 year ago

Thanks for the feedback. While I have thought about the sound effects, I always leave them last in my projects because I'm not into sound design. But the idea of parallax never crossed my mind. Thanks.

I discontinued CLOUDY project shortly after posting it on this site, I'm not even sure if any of the source files is saved anymore. I learned a lot while making it and more since then. The small things truly add to the enjoyment and I'll put that in mind for my next works.

Speaking about other works. If you'd like you might want to check my other project on my profile on Roastmygame.com, I improved since then.

Thanks again for the feedback~
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Bund187 3 years ago

Level Design Mechanics

I really like the idea you can take a lot from it. It is simple but challenging, maybe sometimes too much. You have to position the clud a bit forward to rain over the trees but if you do that you cant avoid the tornados, that´s something to think about it. Also think about adding some more content, the game works as it is but it need more action.

ahmadmanga 1 year ago

Thanks. The reason I decided to make it in the first place because I thought the idea was cool. I wasn't sure how to make it good to play though. I wish I took more time adjusting the gameplay, but I'm not sure if I have the source codes for this project anymore...

If you'd like you might want to check my other project(s) here. (Check my profile, I already added one of them before replying.)

Thanks again for the feedback.
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Quackling 3 years ago

Controls Level Design

Could think about how to extend the concept beyond single trees on the ground e.g. objects to avoid watering.

ahmadmanga 1 year ago

While I was working on the project, I didn't think of other ways it could be expaned on other than trees? I thought I might add a storm or something? Not sure... I used to have source codes for CLOUDY somewhere safe, but I'm not sure I have them anymore, so the project is discontinued.

Thanks for the feedback, if you like, you might want to check my other project here.
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Dukebot 3 years ago

Mechanics Animation

Fun game! But it could be improved with some sound and maybe some effects like parallax.

harshpoddar 3 years ago

Controls

The game can use more frequent water clouds.

future-games 3 years ago

Level Design

Great game! I got a better score on my second game then my first, which is weird, because the first was a tutorial. I really enjoyed the game, I suggest you improve the collision detection, and sometimes I thought it would be better if the sky was slightly taller.

KlockedOutGames 3 years ago

Tutorial/Learning Curve Story/Writing/Dialogue

Was a decent little game, maybe the rain could be more responsive to where i want it to go, like slightly in front of where it goes.

PakistaniGammer 2 years ago

Story/Writing/Dialogue

Best game i played ever you can make rainy day whenever you want this just amazing lovely

PakistaniGammer 2 years ago

Story/Writing/Dialogue

Best game i played ever you can make rainy day whenever you want this just amazing lovely

NAITIK-singh-coder-944 2 years ago

Pro app bro good bless you

kiyawatson03 1 year ago

Controls Game Graphics

The animation of the game could be improved but I really enjoyed how simple and fun the game was.

OneManDev 9 months ago

great game loved it (partially because i love space)

JonesyOnFire 4 months ago

Game Graphics

I really like the look and feel of your game, however it does look a little simple, maybe add some other graphics like rainbows etc.

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