This is not a roast exactly, i don't have any constructive criticism. Simply put I think what your offering here is amazing. Definitely the most complete product I have tested on RoastMyGame to date :)
As a solo game dev working from home, I probably don't represent the masses when I say that this game really spoke to me in a way that I was not expecting or prepared for. You hit the nail on the head with the writing (something I think I struggle with), and I really can't wait to see where the second chapter takes things :)