Hi
I just played your game and I have to say the idea was really really super cool. I truly enjoyed the core of the story, especially the design and UIs. There were only some issues that could help me like this game even further if they were included. I know it was supposed to be a short game but I have several suggestions if you don't mind;
- The beginning was mute (as long as I played) until the main game finally starts. It could be nicer if the beginning has its own music track.
- When you click UI buttons, there were no SFX, maybe better to have them?
- The first tutorial UIs were kind of long and maybe boring the way they were. Perhaps if you embed some multi-choice questions there and let the player make decisions among those options hook them better and not bored.
- The mechanics when you buy stuff and cook is good but always the same and very stereotypical. A puzzle-type game may fit better to have the player amused by solving them when cooking.
Overall, good job, and btw, I would be beyond happy if you also try our first game, "ORBDASH", on itch.io. We need honest brutal feedback. If you have some spare time to play it, please tell us what you like and what you dislike. Any opinion is welcomed.
https://apex-phoenix.itch.io/orbdashThank you in advance and keep up the good work.