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The Deep - Browser, Choose Your Own Adventure
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An Interactive Fiction where you play as a servant to the Lord on an archipelago island. The Lord's wife has gone missing, and you're his number one suspect. Make choices to determine the outcome of the story.


The Locrian
1570
2

A story about our relationship with the future.


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Mechanics Tutorial/Learning Curve

I got a lot of lag, that might have been on my end but it was so consistent that I think it might have been the game itself. It's a fun concept piece, but two critiques I would give are that:

1. A lot of the things you can craft seem to just be different coloured versions of previous items, having the same functionality. I understand wanting to craft better and more durable versions of the same items, but when so many of the things you can craft are functionally identical, it can make the game feel thin.

2. So far, there really isn't a single aspect of the game to separate it from other survival games. I would focus on trying to find at least one unique thing your game does that the others don't because unfortunately there are already so many games in this genre that even a really well-crafted survival game might not get a lot of love if it doesn't have something to set it apart. Is the focus on Pvp? Or is this trying to aim to be more of a player-driven world that evolves according to the way players choose to interact? From what I've played so far I'm not really sure.

3 years ago

Thanks a lot for your feedback, you make some great points in here. I'm glad you enjoyed the game, thanks for playing.

3 years ago
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