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You're a janitor working at the DK Hotel. Can you survive the night and complete your shift in time?Download: https://mawzdev.itch.io/dk-hotelThis is a short horror game based on Donkey Kong characters. It's my first game made with Unity 3D, so some things may look unpolished. I also used many assets from the Asset Store, and some from The Modeler's Resource.


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Hi, first off let me just say that this game is amazing - once you complete it you have to put it on steam, it will be an indie hit. Great controls, great graphics, great music, great atmosphere/mood. There are some things that I noticed that could be better, though. There was a slight gap in four or so tiles in the section with the gray buildings. This happens to me all the time in Unity's tile system (which I assume you're using), and I fix it by either adding extra pixels to certain tiles or by correcting the pixels per tile amount in the import settings. Not a major issue, though. Another thing is that the waterfall tiles at the beginning of the game look a bit off. Also, you should add some more dialogue, whether it be in the intro with the silhouetted people or when you get teleported in the forest. Finally, the font used for the text on the skull in the central forest area is a bit unfitting. I suggest you use a font more like "Perfect DOS VGA," "Gamer," "Early GameBoy," or "Alagard." Otherwise, this game is absolutely amazing, and again, make sure to put it on steam when you're finished as I am sure people will love this (it may even reach the heights of Undertale, Stardew Valley, etc. - it reminded me of Undertale but with much better graphics). Also, just a quick question, are you doing this project alone? Did you make all of the art, music, and code by yourself?

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