Welcome to the My Beautiful Paper Smile Roast 'My Game' page! My Beautiful Paper Smile is a psychological horror game about a world where children are raised to be perfect. Perfection is rewarded, but imperfection is punished severely, and secretly. Children go missing on a regular basis, and you know you need to escape The Facility. The game will take place across four chapters, and the first is currently under development. It follows a horror theme that avoids common jump-scares (I never said the game doesn't have ANY jump-scares) and aims to deliver players with a subtly disturbing experience. This is accomplished through the atmosphere, which includes black and white hand drawn graphics and unique minimalistic sound design. While the game makes sense as a story when played through casually, I have also included hidden lore implanted deep within every part of the game that hints to the drive behind the characters motives. The first chapter of the game will be released for free on Steam late next year. If you have questions about the game, feel free to message me through Facebook, or email me directly at firstname.lastname@example.org.
I think your game has a decent mechanic of needing to tap certain balloons, while avoiding others, but I do feel that it may be to slow paced to keep most peoples attention. I would suggest generally speeding up play speed, and possibly using different visuals. The balloon aesthetic is nice, but it won't carry much weight.
Best of luck!