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Black Hoodie Robber
The Black Hoodie Robber is a 2D game about a thief stealing treasure boxes on his pathway. The game consists of three levels where the player tries to remain alive while collecting treasure boxes to gain health as well as wealth.
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makostacksGames 2 years ago
UI Graphics Game Graphicsthey suck Im just saying this bc I want to publish a game I kinda like the game but certain elements could be better
VCDGamer 2 years ago
UI Graphics Story/Writing/DialogueFirst of all, I'll be very honest with you: I haven't played the game yet(You didn't drop a download button or link!)
But, even without me playing the game, the game's description and visuals are usually the type of things that keeps me hooked on a game. And yours are lacking a lot in that category: no gameplay videos or pictures, nothing. Even the game's description had a great start but crashed along the way. The player has to remain alive? The treasure boxes also serves as the player's actual health? You see the problems yet?
My advice right now would be to really work on the game's general plot, not too long not too simple. You could check out the descriptions of my games as an example. Also add more convincing visuals on this page, I'm begging you! Lastly, if the player is a robber, why on Earth does he look like a mortal Kombat character(Scorpion)?
That's all I have to say, also drop a link where I can download the game, okay? Good luck. :)
But, even without me playing the game, the game's description and visuals are usually the type of things that keeps me hooked on a game. And yours are lacking a lot in that category: no gameplay videos or pictures, nothing. Even the game's description had a great start but crashed along the way. The player has to remain alive? The treasure boxes also serves as the player's actual health? You see the problems yet?
My advice right now would be to really work on the game's general plot, not too long not too simple. You could check out the descriptions of my games as an example. Also add more convincing visuals on this page, I'm begging you! Lastly, if the player is a robber, why on Earth does he look like a mortal Kombat character(Scorpion)?
That's all I have to say, also drop a link where I can download the game, okay? Good luck. :)
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